1.1 --- a/en/ch02-tour-basic.tex	Thu Jan 29 22:56:27 2009 -0800
     1.2 +++ b/en/ch02-tour-basic.tex	Thu Feb 05 00:01:16 2009 -0800
     1.3 @@ -206,8 +206,7 @@
     1.4    \label{fig:tour-basic:history}
     1.5  \end{figure}
     1.6  
     1.7 -\subsection{Changesets, revisions, and talking to other 
     1.8 -  people}
     1.9 +\subsection{Changesets, revisions, and talking to other people}
    1.10  
    1.11  As English is a notoriously sloppy language, and computer science has
    1.12  a hallowed history of terminological confusion (why use one term when
    1.13 @@ -225,8 +224,7 @@
    1.14  hexadecimal string.
    1.15  \begin{itemize}
    1.16  \item The revision number is \emph{only valid in that repository},
    1.17 -\item while the hex string is the \emph{permanent, unchanging
    1.18 -    identifier} that will always identify that exact changeset in
    1.19 +\item while the hex string is the \emph{permanent, unchanging identifier} that will always identify that exact changeset in
    1.20    \emph{every} copy of the repository.
    1.21  \end{itemize}
    1.22  This distinction is important.  If you send someone an email talking